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SOP 11
Refresh a promotion in order of operational drag
What this page is for. Use it when advertising that used to work has gone flat. It gives you six changes to make, in a fixed order, with the cost of each — so you spend the least you can to make the thing feel new again.
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1. Why promotions tire, and how fast
In a small market you get through the audience quickly. That is the double edge of local advertising: it is easy to make it work, and hard to keep it working, because the same people keep seeing the same thing. Expect to have to reinvent the wheel about every 21 days.
The order below is deliberate. Work in reverse order of difficulty, starting with the change that costs you nothing operationally and stopping as soon as the advertising is working again. Every step further down the list touches more of your business.
Flag: does the ad tire, or the funnel? This page expects advertising to tire, and starts every refresh with the creative. A second view, from an ads practitioner: an ad that is good enough does not tire, and some accounts have put a million dollars behind one ad without it wearing out. When results do fall once spend passes some level, which differs by business, that view looks past the ad to what is usually at fault, the messaging in the funnel and the landing page, and holds that testing 20 pages teaches more about your ads than testing a thousand creatives. A paid-ads team's practice here leans the other way: it treats the creative as the lever, and keeps feeding new ads in. This page does not settle which reading is right.
2. The six changes, in order
2.1 Change the creative
The images and video in the advertisement. Nothing about what you sell changes, nothing about the words changes — only the picture attached to them. It is the cheapest move you have, and it is where you start every time.
Two advertisements running the identical program, with identical wording and different pictures, are two advertisements as far as the audience is concerned. That is the whole economy of starting here: you are not making a new offer, you are giving an existing one a new surface. A single piece of copy that works can carry a long run of these before it is spent.
2.2 Change the body copy
The words of the advertisement itself. Copy that performs can carry refresh after refresh of the creative before the words themselves need replacing. This takes more time than swapping an image, which is exactly why it is second rather than first.
2.3 Change the headline
The wrapper around the offer — the name you built on SOP 10. What you deliver is untouched; the package it arrives in is new.
| From | To | What moved |
|---|---|---|
| A free six-week lean challenge | A free six-week tone challenge | The goal word |
| Holiday hangover | New year, new you | The name only, over the same period and the same season |
| A free six-week weight-loss offer | A free 42-day detox | The interval and the goal word |
2.4 Change the duration of the offer
Two versions of this, and they cost very different amounts.
Change the unit you measure in. More or less the same period, counted differently: one month becomes 28 days, or four weeks. That is three days' difference, and nothing in your business has to change at all — the promotion simply reads as new. Seven days can be stated as 168 hours or as one week; picking the unusual unit is often enough on its own to make an offer feel different.
Change the length itself. One month becomes six weeks. Now your contracts probably change, your sales people have to be told, and fulfillment has to cover the extra weeks. It works, and it is not free.
2.5 Change the enhancer
The enhancer is the free or discounted component sitting on top of the offer. Its job is to move people who were interested and would not otherwise have acted.
The view here is that mild discounts do not do much. Ten or twenty percent off is unlikely to change buying behavior or to bring in someone who was not going to buy; free and large discounts will. Worked variations on one dollar:
| From | To |
|---|---|
| A $1 trial | A free start, or a free trial |
| A $1 trial | The same thing stated as 99 off, or as 99.2 off |
| A $1 trial | No money down |
Changing the enhancer on its own refreshes the whole advertisement around it. In most businesses it holds steady and is rarely touched.
2.6 Change the monetization structure
The series of offers you put in front of prospects and the price points attached to them. This is the core of the business, and it is the heaviest change on the list by a wide margin. Once you have a structure that works, leave it alone.
3. How often each one moves
| Change | Typical cadence |
|---|---|
| The creative | Every seven days |
| The body copy | Every two to three weeks |
| The headline | Roughly every quarter |
| The duration of the offer | Once or twice a year |
| The enhancer | Usually constant |
| The monetization structure | Perhaps every two to three years |
Read the table as a description of where the work actually goes. Almost all of it is at the top.
4. The order of work
- Swap the creative. Run it. Stop here if it works.
- Rewrite the body copy. Run it. Stop here if it works.
- Rewrite the headline, keeping what you deliver unchanged.
- Change the unit the duration is measured in before you change the duration itself.
- Only then touch the enhancer, and only then the structure underneath everything.
5. What each step costs
Each step down the list buys a fresher promotion at the price of more operational drag: a new picture costs little, a new duration costs contracts and a briefing for whoever sells, and a new monetization structure costs the shape of the business. Stopping as soon as the advertising recovers is not laziness — it is the point of putting the steps in this order.
6. What this page does not cover
Building the name you are refreshing is not covered on this page; that is SOP 10. Scarcity and urgency, which give a promotion its reason why, are on SOP 9. Designing the series of offers and the price points named in §2.6 is on SOP 59 — Assemble a money model from four prongs.
Terms defined on this page
- Creative (images and footage)
- The pictures and video in an ad. Swapping them is the cheapest refresh and the first one to make; it typically moves every seven days.
- Enhancer
- The free item or large discount on top of an offer that moves interested people to act. The view here is that mild discounts of 10 or 20 percent seldom do much; in most businesses the enhancer stays the same from one refresh to the next.
- Monetization structure
- The series of offers put in front of prospects and their price points; the core of the business and the hardest thing to change, perhaps every two to three years.
- Operational drag
- How much of the business a change touches. Promotion refreshes are ordered from least drag (new images) to most (new monetization structure); a new tier that adds a fifth to revenue while doubling the work is arguably a poor trade.